“Broken I”
The following is a yet-to-be-defined form of poetry or writing specific to the platform of social networking websites like Twitter or Tumblr. I have coined the term “Flashverse,” to describe the stream of consciousness, written in real time, without edit or premeditated form. In order to indicate to my followers and to people reading my timeline, after each line I use a Hashtag, in this instance #gwV. By placing the Hash or Pound symbol ( # ) before a sequence of alphabetical integers, a link is created for a new timeline featuring whatever is written under that hashtag exclusively. Unfortunately, this is not a permanent link and after 48 hours, a Flashverse like #gwV becomes unavailable unless preserved elsewhere.
“Broken I” combines both excerpts from my Twitter Timeline beginning Jan-29-2011 and ending on Feb-02-2011, and the poetry from the now defunct hashtag, #gwV. The image below represents the entire Flashverse, consolidated from the series of 140 character limit messages posted before, during and after its creation.
Each new line, represents a new message.
When a date or hashtag is indicated in parentheses after a line, the reader will identify this as either beginning or ending a sequence in the timeline.
A = A … Being told that A = G or A = M or whatever best fits someone’s agenda…. you question your own sanity. (28-Jan)
If you have to hear it enough.
I’m not a super hero. I’m as human as you. Please don’t expect me to be some flawless expectation, some character from your imagination.
And just because you have tunnel vision into the most secret parts of who I am and what I feel, doesn’t mean you have the whole picture.
#wtfdidntsignupforcombatinWWIorQUANTUMLEAPsowhythefuckamIevenbotheringwiththisextremelylonghashtagfornoreasonbutasametaphor (28-Jan)
I feel washed out, so hence the current Avi. I don’t know about you all but hearing that vandals and looters are desecrating history? (29-Jan)
It was Romain Rolland who wrote vehemently about how abhorrant this kind of desecration is during the start of WWI, in August 1914
“…Louvain is now no more than a heap of ashes–Louvain with its treasures of art and of science, the sacred town!”
“…by what name do you want us to call you now since you repudiate the title of barbarians? Are u the grandsons of Goethe or of Attila?”
“Are you making war on enemies or on human spirit? Kill men if you like, but respect masterpieces. They are the patrimony of human race.”
Find me here — somewhere between memory and the daydream — softly lapping upon the shoreline — lying beneath the wake of a beginning (#gwV)
Or drowning in the wake of the end
#Uncle
#HOWL
Fractured away with the sand — into the deep — into the darkness — swallowed among weathered stones — no limbs to fight the current
Find me here — between what is real and what is nightmare — rising in your sleep, listen as closely as you can — hear me calling
Find me here — between the memory and the daydream — reach into the hollows — straight line — gently — my mind is a spiderweb
Glistening in the darkness with fresh morning droplets of dew — as fragile, as beautiful — so easily broken — so hard to define
So unlike all others — woven with its own design — falling into nothing — hear me calling — hear it echoing — thru the salty brine
I’m there in the crest — my voice among all the rest — what you glimpse for that moment — a wave folds and foams — find me there
Find me here — take me home — bring me Home — let me rest on your shores (#gwV)
feeling twice my age…so who cares if I commit, go away…EST might be the best way…to slay my conscience, leave it forgotten in sludge
Not to notice time, not to notice age, not to notice anything but nothing, vacant, sedated, rocking day after day on the front porch
Touched by nothing, feeling nothing, seeing nothing, living nothing might be better than feeling this waste
Vacant — Fried — Alive but without sin — to die and pass into the light — hope for the better then — but not now, not with who I am
#Uncle
too late
too slow
too fat
too old
too much
not enough
too human
so gross
knock me out knock me out get it over knock me out knock me out knock me out get it over knock me out knock me out knock me out get it over
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Alice’s Bucket List: Hashtag On Twitter, Epic Win
In 21st Century Culture, NEWS AND COMMENTARY, TWITTER CULTURE on June 9, 2011 at 1:46 AMWithin moments of seeing the first message on my stream, the hashtag #AliceBucketList was trending worldwide.
A 15 year old girl with terminal cancer just started a blog on Blogspot.com. There are only two entries thus far, but what stands out immediately? Her Bucket List.
And guess what’s on it?
…. TO TREND ON TWITTER? Some may argue no, this is not on her “Bucket List,” but by creating the trend, more people are going to see her blog and reading it.
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Here she is, Alice Pyne, http://alicepyne.blogspot.com/?spref=tw
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Again, within moments, enough people retweeted the link to her blog and the Hashtag, #AliceBucketList, to start it trending worldwide. Behold! Twitter can be used for good. Yes, there are the #Weinergate ‘hashtagging’ species of Twitter users, but the power of this little hash symbol ought not be underestimated.
Alice Pyne helps us see how the communication and message capabilities across a social network platform like Twitter, can be used for good purposes. Despite being separated by geography, user names, and computer screens, we can actually come together and spread a little love and support. Will this really make a difference in someone’s life? Consider the case of Alice and her Bucket List as an example. She makes a difference in our lives.
Cancer is a monster many face but the importance of self-education and cancer awareness, preventative medicine and also, community support, is something every single one of us must face, NOW. Not too many folks know what to do if they are diagnosed. Not too many folks know there are things we can do to help cancer patients. But this new platform for communication has allowed for there to be a forum to access and share information like this, so more people can learn and a difference can be made.
So, to Alice, I want to say thank you.
DEVELOPING, June 9, 2011: 01:50 FROM June 8,2011: 23:45 (EST) from 19:00 (EST)
I find it fascinating that I experienced an ad hominem attack from a random Twitter user who stated in a tweet that I endorse, “Lying by any means.” I do NOT advocate for using a lie to get attention. The question is, within the 140 characters allowed on Twitter, are using “hooks” as they do in marketing and advertising, examples of “lying.” Is this an example of a “False Hook,” and an immoral event on the social network? What do you think? See the latest from the BBC and David Cameron’s support for Alice’s Bone Marrow Donor Aim
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